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September 7th, 2014, 1:14 am

Average Rating: 5.00
...don't wanna wake up... ...yes ma, I would like some html, jus' pile it on my plate... ...zzz...
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Posted at September 7th, 2014, 1:26 am

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Luigi_96
Posted by Luigi_96
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Dude, your visual style is fantastic!

Posted at September 7th, 2014, 7:57 am

@Luigi_96: Thank you! :D

Posted at September 7th, 2014, 8:02 am

8bithuman
Posted by 8bithuman
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Dark matter has a child now
Congratulations

Posted at September 7th, 2014, 8:34 am

DaBrokor
Posted by DaBrokor
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SCRATCH IS BACK
YAY

Posted at September 7th, 2014, 10:12 am

astroninja1
Posted by astroninja1
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criticisms

Your scripting could use some work I think. The way this page reads is pretty awkward. I mean, SUDDEN FEEL? I have a feel brb? It makes it hard for me to take this scene seriously, and it makes the laughs more awkward then funny.

I'm no expert critic though. I feel like maybe you should have Ultimate Yoshi review your comic soon, after a few more pages are up. As is, I'd say the comic has potential but looks like you could use some advice from him and some of the other long running sprite comic authors

Posted at September 7th, 2014, 6:59 pm

@astroninja1: That one part wasn't exactly supposed to be taken seriously, but I definitely see your point.

Posted at September 7th, 2014, 8:37 pm

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